Henry's Cavern

Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:16 am Post subject:

Well, feel free to mention more Gospel de Night characters in Pretty Witches to make up for it, if you want.
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Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

Perhaps. Fukune would be amusing, but some things I plan to do with her in a future story were already given to a character in Pretty Witches, making her redundant or useless, and Night is too powerful a character except for maybe Aikiko. I don't know.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 2:35 am Post subject:

I guess so, but you could just have them be mentioned by other characters in passing; they don't have to actually show up.
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Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

Yes, I just saw your review. Thank you very much for reading. In a review like that though, there's no need to be impartial though.

So, the partners must be symmetrical? In that case, my next original story may have some problems with you since one girl has large breasts only part of the time while the rest she is much smaller than the main heroine. However, Fukune and Night will be important supporting characters.

I still need to correct the mistakes in the later chapters...
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Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

My latest story, Muscle Cuties!, is now avalible for reading. Something of a sequel to Gospel de Night, but that story is not needed to understand this one. Contains girls growing busty and muscular, but they aren't like that all time. This will have explicit girls love and straight love.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 9:41 am Post subject:

Ah, cool. I'm too tired right now to read it, but I'll check it out first thing in the morning tomorrow.
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Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

All right, thank you Phil.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Tue Feb 16, 2010 7:19 pm Post subject:

Just read it. Pretty good.

If you're worried about it like I was, there looks to be more to it than just muscle girls, so if you're not into that eaxactly, you stll might enjoy it.
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Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

I was reading it in the morning, but now I can't remember anything about the story. I'll read it again after I finish my class today (technically, I have two classes, but I'm skipping my second class since I'm so damn disgusted with that class).

EDIT: I finished the first chapter. Good job Ra, my review's already been posted.
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Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

I am going to begin work on more Muscle Cuties! I was supposed to begin a boys love story about Yuu Magaki from my earlier Gospel de Night, but it is not going well, so I might as well focus on Muscle Cuties! for now. However, I will also begin work on another Fukune/Night story, a one-shot that will be mostly romantic rather than erotic.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2010 6:25 am Post subject:

Ah, well sorry to hear you had difficulty with what you wanted to write.

I do look forward to more Muscle Cuties though, and I definitely look forward to the prospect of more Fukune/Night.
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Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

Muscle Cuties! chapter 2 is now ready for reading.
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