Henry's Cavern

Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:14 am Post subject:

Heh. Yeah. I agree. Both sounds like strong fic ideas.
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Rahkshi500 · Joined: 03 Dec 2009 Posts: 1392

Well, I thank you for reading. As I said before, I might be able to write at least one of them.

Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

Speaking of which, I seriously need to revise my Code Geass fanfic. Supposed to take place 86 years after the events of R2, but I realize that's too big of a time gap and I'm trying to re-write the entire story for the third time.
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Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 7:40 am Post subject:

Heh, 86 years is an awfully large gap.
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Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

Exactly. I've already told you the specifics back when I was still using pms at fanfiction.net, but if anyone else is interested, I'll probably post the specifics of what was supposed to happen.
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Rahkshi500 · Joined: 03 Dec 2009 Posts: 1392

I'm interested.

Rahkshi500 · Joined: 03 Dec 2009 Posts: 1392

Oh, and guys, if by chance I am able to make one of my Code Geass ideas into a story, which one would you like to be written?

I personally like to work on the Lost Colors one since alot of thought went into it. But what do you guys think?

Rabukurafuto · Joined: 29 Aug 2009 Posts: 2764 Location: Shadow Galactica

It seems like you have more to work with on a Lost Colors adaptation.
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Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

Ah well, what's the harm. This was my original premise:

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Both versions were supposed to be set 86 years after the events of R2. The three figures: Nunnally, Zero (Susaku), and Schenizel were assassinated at various points of the timeline and a guerrilla organization called the Black Hands of Liberation appeared to the world as an anti-U.F.N. military group. One of the members was Lamonth vi Britannia, son of Empress Nunnally vi Britannia.

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In the first version, he was in suspended animation until Nunnally's assassination then the B.H.L. managed to find his tube and basically kidnap him and basically indoctrinate him into the organization while training him as one the most feared assassins of the organization.

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In the second version, he is the product of a rape (someone took advantage of poor Nunnally) and was again kidnapped after his mother was killed. Instead of indoctrinating him in an early age, they use mind-influencing drugs to alter his memories and keep his true identity secret while again, he becomes their assassin.

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In both versions, he's meets a woman who goes by the name of G.G. who apparently stumbled onto the grounds of one of the B.H.L. bases. Lamonth saves her and she gives him Geass along with his true memories and is told of his true bloodline and the legacy he was destined (i.e. become the next Zero).

In the first version, he aids the beleaguered Black Knights forces operating in the U.K. fight off his former organization and he eventually gains the trust of the U.F.N. and becomes the next Zero with their blessing. Then it goes from the Third Battle of Japan against a B.H.L. cell operating in Tokyo, to the Second Russian Civil War where the B.H.L. are revealed to be a covert paramilitary group supported by Britannia in a covert attempt to take over the world again. I stopped at the 16th chapter in this one where Britannia uses a FLEJIA on Moscow where Lamonth and his Black Knight forces had just occupied.

In the second version, he breaks into his former organization's headquarters and finds the documents to prove who he is since he initially doesn't believe G.G. After uncovering the turth, he convinces his handler who posed as his 'sister' to join him in rebelling against the B.H.L. and head to the nearest U.F.N. building (again in the U.K., only in London instead of Manchester in the first version). The U.F.N. agree for him to take the helm as Zero, but after driving back the B.H.L. advance, he is branded a traitor and slated for execution. He is then rescued by a rogue U.F.N. commander who believes he is being framed so he wouldn't expose the fact that the U.F.N. is indeed the new 'Britannia', which at this time the U.F.N. has begun consolidating power into the national government and has begun silencing dissent within its member states and its internal national government. Lamonth, his 'sister', and the rogue U.F.N. commander hijack an aircraft carrier and head to Britannia where again I stopped there.
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Rahkshi500 · Joined: 03 Dec 2009 Posts: 1392

Thank you for explaining your idea, Selrahc.

Phil the Time Wizard · Posted: Sat Apr 10, 2010 8:29 am Post subject:

Yeah, your Lost Colors idea does sound more developed Rahkshi.

And I'm already familiar with the WOL stuff.
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Selrahc · Joined: 06 Sep 2009 Posts: 8268 Location: The sky

Yeah, when I first planned the idea, I was convinced that it would be a good if not the best post-R2 fanfic. It was pretty obvious that by the middle of the first half of the fanfic, it wasn't going to work. It pretty much sucked and I had to take down both versions.
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